I like how you ended your poem with your name.
Great poem. I like the picture, it almost looks like a commercial for a tailgate party!
I can relate! I forgot to eat the last two days...Between school and work I forget to eat and sleep.
I didnt come from a small town, but what you have highlighted, I wouldnt mind it! The 'simple' life can sometimes be the best!!
I like how it shows that you are happy with your present,but still look back with love of your memories of growing up.This is really good!
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I like how you ended your poem with your name.
Great poem. I like the picture, it almost looks like a commercial for a tailgate party!
I can relate! I forgot to eat the last two days...Between school and work I forget to eat and sleep.
I didnt come from a small town, but what you have highlighted, I wouldnt mind it! The 'simple' life can sometimes be the best!!
I like how it shows that you are happy with your present,but still look back with love of your memories of growing up.This is really good!
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