I can tell why you would want to go back at times. It looks wonderful there
It sounds really different there. I have always wanted to make it out that way
I enjoyed the rhymes.It made your poem more singsong, and I like that.
Interesting poem. Perfect for the picture that was chosen. You have made the desert sound like such a beautiful place
Very nice poem. I really enjoy it. I would love to see the desert at some point.
Really like your picture. I could really take myself there with your words.... liked the flow. Best poem I have read so far.
Very cool pic!
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I can tell why you would want to go back at times. It looks wonderful there
It sounds really different there. I have always wanted to make it out that way
I enjoyed the rhymes.It made your poem more singsong, and I like that.
Interesting poem. Perfect for the picture that was chosen. You have made the desert sound like such a beautiful place
Very nice poem. I really enjoy it. I would love to see the desert at some point.
Really like your picture. I could really take myself there with your words.... liked the flow. Best poem I have read so far.
Very cool pic!
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