I really like your poem. I like how you gradually went from your child hood to your present. My favorite one would have to be your last choice of words.
I was just wondering where are in that picture.
Nice poem, sounds like you enjoy the water. I like the picture too, looks like somewhere I would like to be.
The picture is from when I went to Jamaica this summer.
I really like how you contrasted the party side and yet being on the river and being content and feeling at peace.
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I really like your poem. I like how you gradually went from your child hood to your present. My favorite one would have to be your last choice of words.
I was just wondering where are in that picture.
Nice poem, sounds like you enjoy the water. I like the picture too, looks like somewhere I would like to be.
The picture is from when I went to Jamaica this summer.
I really like how you contrasted the party side and yet being on the river and being content and feeling at peace.
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